[Israel.pm] Bookreview: Pragmatic Version Control with Subversion

[Uri Bruck]

Shlomi Fish wrote:
> On Tuesday 26 April 2005 20:55, Gabor Szabo wrote:
> 
>>I have just finished this book and though you might like to read my review:
>>
>>http://www.szabgab.com/articles/pragmatic_version_control_using_subversion.
>>html
>>
>>In the Other Resources section it mentions Better SCM (of Shlomi Fish).
>>

> 
> "Insted of keeping with the theme" -> "keeping up"

"keeping the theme" sounds good here.
"keeping with the theme" isn't what's written, but would also be fine.
"keeping up" doesn't parse here. The theme isn't going anywhere, you 
don't need to keep up with it.

> 

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Uri
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